I think your idea is clever but I was a little confused as to what you were putting on your car at first--I thought it might have been paper towels. Maybe if you just wrapped the car in a strip of tin foil the idea could have been clearer. Also this seems like the "second minute" portion of the assignment--where is the first part? I think it would be nice for the first part to be the still car with just subtle movements in the clouds, trees, maybe people outside, etc.
I agree with alyson. I like the idea of trying to make your car shinier, but if the video showed you tearing off long strips of tin foil and then wrapping the car with them, it would be a lot more clear. And I also wish there had been more of a 1st minute. One interesting thing would've been if you could have done a time lapse and captured the movements of the clouds reflected in the windows of the car. Difficult to get, but an idea.
i really liked this video. i think it's a good take on trying to recreate your car without actually making your car over again. i like the simple title too.
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I think your idea is clever but I was a little confused as to what you were putting on your car at first--I thought it might have been paper towels. Maybe if you just wrapped the car in a strip of tin foil the idea could have been clearer. Also this seems like the "second minute" portion of the assignment--where is the first part? I think it would be nice for the first part to be the still car with just subtle movements in the clouds, trees, maybe people outside, etc.
I'm a bit confused.
what was the connection?
I agree with alyson. I like the idea of trying to make your car shinier, but if the video showed you tearing off long strips of tin foil and then wrapping the car with them, it would be a lot more clear. And I also wish there had been more of a 1st minute. One interesting thing would've been if you could have done a time lapse and captured the movements of the clouds reflected in the windows of the car. Difficult to get, but an idea.
i really liked this video. i think it's a good take on trying to recreate your car without actually making your car over again. i like the simple title too.
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